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Can’t stop, try as I might
keeps hope in sight
i have the right
when something bites
don’t want to fight
seeks to make light
thoughts take flight
helps things sit right
peace-fills the night
i feel alright
all this; the why i write
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This poem is for One Shot Wednesday and also was submitted to The National Gallery Of Writing.
Today October 20, 2010 is the 2nd Annual National Day for Writing sponsored by the NCTE and The National Gallery of Writing.
LOOOOOVED this 😀
just fantastic, it really feels alright.
Yay! 🙂
Its our peace of mind after all.
Why i write? yeah ..all reasons you said and more, reading what Amanda said i totally agree, it happens to me all the time, laying in my bed and the thoughts jump in in a built up poem that never leaves my mind until i crawl off to write it down, keeping papers & pen handy sometimes work too..:)
but it is a lovely read here..thank you for sharing..:)
Thank YOU for coming to read here… 🙂
1-rhyme verse– love the intensity!
Thank you, Marilynn 🙂
beautiful rhythm,
I hear the sound of your words.
thanks for sharing.
Thank you, Jingle for the beautiful… 🙂
Lovely reasons to write, and I am so glad you do and that you share your writing wit us. Thank you.
Thank you for the sweet thoughts… and for taking the time to read here 🙂
I have the same problem, wake up in the middle of the night and no way I can switch my mind off…sometimes I dream about something and that becomes a poem…notepad normally next to my bed does the thing but these days I start writing when I wake…for the last couple of months I wake up at exactly 3.33am….(I know) strange but I know it’s just my internal clock working overtime..(Chronohabituation) …I am so happy you write my friend….for you touch me with every post 🙂 Much love Heartspell xxxxx
I often wake around that time as well… but I just toss and turn until I go back to sleep…I think it’s an aging thing…oh well… You are sweet to say those things… I find that I do love to write… 🙂 xoxoxoxoxoxox Love to you, sweet, dear friend, Amanda
Beautifully said.. I enjoyed your words…. they are so simple yet convey the meaning so beautifully…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Thanks for the lovely words… 🙂
Love the flow and rhyme – really great punch at the end
Thanks for sharing with One Shot
We would love to invite you to submit to our competition. Unfortunately it ends this Friday.
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Thank you for your kind thoughts and I did already submit to the competition…I hope your received it…I have e-mailed you to ask about this. Thanks… 🙂 heartspell
i love the flow and rhythm here… it’s nice to hear an awesome poet “thinking out loud.”
You are too kind, Bing…. 🙂 Heartspell
Great reasons to write! Relatable one shot.
Thank you for coming here to read. Glad you could relate. 🙂 Heartspell
There is something about writing that permits one to sleep better…well sometimes…I often keep pondering over the words at night…I’ve always done that…so…glad someone sleeps well. 😉
I try to write in the morning… my only problem is when I wake up in the middle of the night and my brain decides it is time to turn on with thoughts of my children or an idea for a poem, then I’m wide awake…. 🙂 Heartspell
Though I feel your plight
your future looks bright
just as long as you fight
with all of your might
to reach that new height
Love this reply… lifted me high… like pie in the sky! 🙂 heartspell
lovely flow in your poem and great reasons to write..
thank you for coming to my blog. Heartspell
Such a lovely thought, rhyming flow delight 🙂 very nice! ~April
Thanks, April… I’m delighted you like it!
Great philosophy in your verse and lots of rhyme. Beautiful, heartspell. Blessings to you…
Thanks always for the blessings and for the kudos, too. 🙂
I’m glad you write and I think in this poem you speak for us all.
Good one shot!
I am glad to speak for all…thank you for reading here. Heartspell 🙂
Great reasons to write indeed. Can’t stop, indeed. Good one shot.
I guess you feel the same way… 🙂
Nice one shot!
I enjoyed reading this poem… hope to read more of yours!
Wysteria
Thank you for visiting… and for the sweet thoughts. 🙂
smiles. all that and more…i think if i stopped my head or my heart might explode…smiles. nice one shot
You are so right and we don’t need any exploding heads or hearts… not a pretty sight, I would guess. 🙂 Heartspell