once
upon a time
a life began
but what if
life could last
longer than a time
it’s said a lifetime can
if you knew you’d never die
would you try to end your life
or would you just die to learn
the way to live, the way to love
give, forget time, forgive
forget, forgive, give
give love, live
you’d then discover
life much longer
than the life
that began
upon a time
once
Heartspell 
elegant…
😉
Thank you, Jingle. 🙂
I love the way the words dance upon themselves.
Thank you for reading here.
A great and thought-provoking poem – I am just dying “to learn the way to live..” so if you know, please let me know the secret! lol xx
I don’t proclaim to know! I just live the best life I can…. 🙂
Sounds like the only way possible really! 😉
Have a great Easter weekend xx
Thank you, Chloe…. Happy Easter to you!
Nice presentation…
Thank you and welcome to my blog. 🙂
Lovely thoughtful write!
Thank you, Marilynn and best wishes to you.
Wow…definitely makes you think about how to appreciate life
Thank you, and thanks for visiting my blog. 🙂
mmm…yeah, hopefully we dont have to die to learn that…but it is a much sweeter life…
“dying to learn” as an expression of great desire… no, I wouldn’t want anyone to die literally unless it was their moment… 🙂
Very beautiful..
I loved how you began n ended with “once upon a time”.. Very poignant!
A lovely thought indeed.. hugs xx
Thank you, Olivia… hugs to you, as well…. 🙂
A very poignant and thought provoking poem.
Thank you, Charles… 🙂
oh very profound and thought provoking….now I must think a moment upon my life that started “once upon a time”…..thank you…bkm
I hope the time it was upon was a wonderful one… thank you for visiting. 🙂