Hope must live in song
for it breathes joy into us
Hearts fill to bursting
the overflow spreading forth
blending lives in harmony
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Its voice strong and clear
His music speaks for itself
delighting all souls
with the gift of unity
Song joins the hands of the world
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These poems are for One shot Wednesday
These lovely awards were given to me by RiikaInfinityy
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Liked it so much… thanks for sharing…
I always considered hope to be an imposter giving us a falls sense of looking forward to something that can be positive so that we keep living… but your song tells me that it does come around to give us joy too…Amen
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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I love tanka ! and i really think you did a great job 🙂
Nice idea-hope in music. Brings it in on two levels, on the earthly plain and on the celestial one. Well written. Thank you. Gay @beachanny
Thank you for the lovely comment and for reading. 🙂 heartspell
I have tried to comment on your posts several times, but it always says the url has illegal characters…just wanted you to know I have enjoyed reading your work. Heartspell
Worthy subject. Nice use of poetry to address larger concerns. I appreciate your work here. – bill
Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. Heartspell
Lovely!! Music really has a lovely and magical way of speaking for itself! I loved that line a lot, H!! And you are so right about hope living in songs… it seems like the most appropriate sentence EVER!!!
How well you put these simple thoughts to words, HeartSpell… and you always leave me spellbound!
Many hugs to you my friend, for this beautiful Tanka set!
Thank you for the thoughtful words, Kavita…yes, sometimes I think Music could save the world from all it’s woes. 🙂 heartspell
uplifting song,
beautiful presentation.
Thank you, Jingle. Music is uplifting and we are so blessed that there is such a thing. 🙂 heartspell
Amazing rhythm, love your words<3 =P
And something for you^^
I am here to present you the award Sweet Princess :D~ as well as another 3 awards for you! =P
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Have a fun week ahead!=P
Thank you so much, Riika ….You are too sweet! I am very thankful. 🙂 🙂 🙂 Heartspell
great oneshot
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Thank you for reading. Heartspell
Joining in your song of hope
it fills our hearts
and overflows
to splash on those depairing souls
who need to know that love is near
Lovely comment; thank you for coming here to read. Heartspell
Nice double-barrelled shot!
Thanks doubly! Heartspell
Music unites and hope will spread a warmth of heart, especially when inspired and the aim is harmony among individuals. Uplifting poem, Heartspell. To reiterate what Brian said, glad to see you at one shot! 🙂
Thank you, Adam…happy to lift you up…you are not heavy. 🙂 heartspell
very beautiful one shot Heartspell 🙂 loved it! 😀
Mine Is Here
Thank you and thanks for sharing yours with me! Heartspell
I love the image of hope in song. Lovely!
So glad you could see. 🙂 heartspell
yes, His music does have a way of doing that…as long as we keep our hands off the instruments…nice tanka…glad to see you at one shot!
Thank you, Brian…great thoughts. Heartspell