Silk satin kisses
love-lining for a sad heart
His hands fill the hole
Smiling lips cover him up
in deep-dug satin kisses
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Open wide, then reach
deep, deep inside where you’ll find
love that’s been waiting
to be shared with those in need
this is the calling you seek
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i am so late with all my reading this week…but still here and going strong….silk satin kisses…what a great opening line…pulled me in from the start…a great one shot…cheers pete
thank you, Pete….no apologies; we read when we can,right, because we love to read what others share, right? thank you for coming here to read… Happy Weekend to you and those you love. 🙂 heartspell
At the end of the day, love is all we need! Whether we admit it or not! So tkae it when you get it, and share all that you have .. and love will only multiply!
Beautifully expressed here, HeartSpell.. as always..
You actually laid out an image – a vivid one – with your words here… and it’s beautiful, AND TRUE!
Keep writing, my dear friend… you are truly amazing!
Thank you for the always sweet words, Kavita. 🙂 heartspell
So very nice. I really enjoyed these.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/moon-over-the-corn/
Thank you, Teresa. I will check yours out. heartspell
i love satin lined kisses too, but the second half was my favorite. Very beautiful writing 🙂
Thank you,Caty. heartspell
very hot words…
wow,
you write beautiful poetry…
keep it up!
Thank you, Jingle…you are kind to say that. Heartspell 🙂
Very lovely kiss… could feel it happening then and there… second one was deep… enjoyed it so much…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Connect with me on Twitter at @VerseEveryDay to read one verse everyday on life, love and longing…
Thank you for the kind comments… I will try to check out your twitter, but I don’t do twitter, although I appreciate the invitation. Heartspell
Awesome, i’m gonna try out this form
It is one of my favorite forms. You should try it. Heartspell 🙂
And I am sending you silk satin kisses all the way from Australia my dear friend…so true that we have to reach deep inside and share with others so much in need…love is all we need Heartspell, you have nicely penned beautiful poetic words here…right into my heart and soul. I miss and love you gorgeous friend!! Much warmth and love coming your way xoxoxoxoxoxo 🙂 xx
Thank you my sweet friend…sorry I missed the Potluck on Monday, but I’ll try for next week and try to catch up on my comments, too. 🙂 Love to you, Amanda…… XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXHeartspell
that second verse nailed it…love to give…we should all seek more to give…great one shot!
Thanks, Brian. heartspell
I second, mean third that…a great opening, but think I like the idea in the next line even more saying it’s the lining of a sad heart. wow Enjoyed the 2nd Tanka as well.
Thank you, Adam…. kisses do help soften sadness, don’t they? Thanks for the wow and the sweet words. 🙂 heartspell
Very nice, Heartspell. Warm and inviting. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for the sweetness and for taking the time. 🙂 heartspell
Liked the way these two complement each other. I think when one has the security of love, then one can give another kind of healing love to others. Well said and quite beautifully.
Thanks, Gay @beachanny (hollyheir is my wordpress blog..for my TX stuff).
Thanks to you, my dear. for the sweet comments.:) heartspell
Must agree with Claudia…the silk satin-kisses was very expressive and beautiful.
You are kind and thank you for being thus. 🙂 heartspell
..like the silk satin-kisses..
thank you. 🙂