In a day
we go from
awake, present, cheerful
to a place
busy, active, thought-filled
to deep within
overwhelmed, distracted, contemplative
then nowhere
tired, unfocused, zombied
ending up somewhere
unwinding, relaxed, peaceful
in to night
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This poem is for Thursday Poets Rally
These lovely gifts are from Jingle
This beautiful gift is from Kavita
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way to capture the amazing emotions we take for granted in our otherwise rudimentary quotidian lives
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html
Hello, friend:
Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
Thanks in advance.
Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…
xox
All in a day? must’ve been busy 😀
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the thing that makes it endearing is being able to relate to it =] good job.
Thanks for the sweet comment. heartspell
sounds like a day in my life for sure! great job! 🙂
Thank you, lynn. heartspell
I like the lay of the poem, beautiful.
My Poets Rally Poem: http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/08/05/falling-august-5-2010/
Thank you and thanks for sharing your poem with me. Heartspell
Your poem sums up my whole day, Heartspell.. very insightful, love this 🙂
This reminds me so much of how almost every day of my life is. Thanks for writing!
wow that sounds like my day here… at the end of the day i just totally space out- from busy, thought-filled to overwhelmed and distracted then on to zombied.
this is a lovely poem, heartspell.
Thank you, yes I think we all go through this… then it’s tomorrow and we start again! 🙂 heartspell
contemplative and zombied – you used one of my favorite words and one of my son’s favorite words in the same poem. I didn’t know it was possible. FANTASTIC!
Glad I could do that for You and Your son. 🙂 Heartspell
That is indeed the course of a day – well done, and thanks, I enjoyed the read
Thanks for the kind response… 🙂 Heartspell
nice thoughts
love ’em
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cheers
Thank you. Heartspell
oh yes, I can relate to this for shure, Heartspell.. once again, your poem astounds 🙂 well written!
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Thank you for the kind words and for sharing… Heartspell
you took us on quite the journey in only a few lines…as many of our lives can be…
Thank you, Brian, for reading. heartspell
I am looking for the peaceful tonight…. thank you for a quiet, reflective poem!
I think we all wish for that. Thank you for coming to my blog. heartspell
I loved the take… great work…
Happy Rally ! !
Sweet Dish
–Someone Is Special–
Thank you for reading here. heartspell
so true so true….
your words are so smooth as butter,,,
loved it 🙂
Thank you, that is very kind of you. Heartspell
Yes we do! And sometimes in reverse. Thanks. I enjoyed this. – bill
Thank you for coming here. heartspell
true words indeed–very well done
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Thank you… Heartspell
We move through such stages it seems more often than we like…enjoyed the poem.
How true…I guess if we just keep moving forward, we will return to the restful part. Thank you for your thoughts. Heartspell
How true, did you get hold of my diary to write this, sounds just like my life. Enjoyed reading this Kx
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Thanks, I am glad you could relate. Heartspell
Very lovely indeed.
Thanks for sharing this one to the all of us…
You are welcome. Thank you for coming here to read. heartspell
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any time, feel free to join in the Rally, I may not always be able to reach poets one by one, I am trying my best. I love everyone’s contribution.
thanks for the long time support..
you are appreciated.
Thank you, Jingle.
welcome in,
smiles!
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take your time visiting!
Thank you so much, Jingle.
so true, and so awesome that you worked the word zombie into this poem. very nice. yeay, nice work!!!!
Thank you and thank you for coming here to read. heartspell
You got it right, Heartspell. That’s what were all about! Thank you for putting it into verse for all of us to enjoy.
You are welcome…it’s good to be here again! heartspell 🙂
heheh.. this was too good, heartspell!! And so easy to relate to too!! I am sure Amanda felt each of thees today! She was super busy! 🙂 And I am now in the zombied phase myself… but my bed’s calling me.. in fact it is SCREAMING out to me! 🙂
This was a super good read!! YOU are super good!
Happy Friday!!! 🙂 xoxoxox
Kavita, you are so kind……but do go to bed so your bed will stop screaming! Ha Ha! Happy weekend to you and those in your heart. Heartspell 🙂 🙂 🙂 xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
ooohh… thanks for accepting and displaying that little token here, HeartSpell…
That really meant a lot to me! A LOT!!! xoxoxoxoox
Have a lovely weekend, my sweet friend…
what an emotional drama….
love the way you say it!
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Yes, a bit like a roller coaster, isn’t it? Thanks, Jingle. Heartspell
Now why do I love this so much? Because it is soooo identifiable, I think this week I went through every single motion and feeling as I have deadlines to meet!!! (the zombied part did it for me ) So well depicted my friend…and the last stanza is what I’ll be doing this weekend!!! Loved it…you wrote this one for me 🙂 🙂 🙂 Love you and keep smiling 😉 xxxxx
Well, I am glad that you could relate, Amanda and maybe reap the benefit of the words here…… and I am wishing you exactly this kind of weekend; peaceful, relaxing, and I’ll toss in joyful, comforting, regenerating, rejuvenating for good measure! Bless you, my sweet friend. 🙂 🙂 🙂 Heartspellxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
nice read
very thought provoking
i tagged you
http://makeachange1.wordpress.com/2010/09/10/band-wagon-tag-and-three-things-tag-plus-an-award/
Thanks for the nice words and for the tag. Heartspell
Thank you , Jingle… 🙂 heartspell