I am swept up
but thriving
as I spin around
and around
and around
I’ll catch my breath
later
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I am swept up
but thriving
as I spin around
and around
and around
I’ll catch my breath
later
This was beautiful and elegant. I particularly liked the four last lines.
Thank you for your comments and for coming to my blog to read. Heartspell
wow. i feel you. at times, every day seems like dizzy day.
Hope they slow down for you soon… Heartspell
I can sooo identify with this one! Great work!
Thank you and thanks for reading. 🙂 Heartspell
i feel that…everyone here seems on different schedules these days…but this too shall pass…
We do adjust, don’t we? Thanks for reading. 🙂 Heartspell
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Oh my, yes, I’ve been through time like this.
Take time to breath, to think … it’s good for you.
Peom is lovely though. Good rhythm and meter and … so human.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and for taking the time to read. Heartspell
I agree with Kavita. Make time to relax though its hard sometimes. This is a great little poem. It encapsulates so much emotion…whirlwind. Love it
relax, and enjoy some freedom…
cute poem, 🙂
Thank you, Jingle….:) Heartspell
I agree with Kavita, it’s the school syndrome!!! In no time you’ll be in the swing of things again. I send you love dear Heartspell. Good one as always xxxx
Thank you , Amanda…sorry so slow lately. Heartspell
Life really does just kind of sweep you up sometimes. Great imagery!
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When life demands that we go along for the ride, we go. Well said, Ms. Heartspell.
Yes, I do….. thus the whirlwind. Heartspell
The school-begins syndrome eh? 🙂
Nicely said, Heartspell!
Take care, my friend… Find time to relax too… (that’s easier said thna done… I know!)
Love ya, friend… (hugs)
I relax at about 10 pm and very quickly lose my head to the noddong. 🙂 Heartspell