Searching for a shooting star
to brightly shine my way
carry me up into the night
where I’ll spread my wings and say
“You have set me free
free from gravity
as I soar above the midnight sky
and sweetly kiss the earth goodbye”
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This poem is for One Shot Wednesday
Heartspell 
I wish we all had the freedom to fly and express our love for this world. 🙂 Thank you for your beautiful words. They made me feel and appreciate the freedom we have. 🙂
Thank you for the sweet words…Happy weekend to you. heartspell
You are tooooo cool 8) 😎
so many times I’ve looked at the sky at night and wondered the same thing. beautifully written 🙂
can i come along with you?
fabulous poem.
Please do, It will be so wonderful.
Thank you. Heartspell
How wonderful to catch a ride on a shooting star. Thanks for taking us along.
You are welcome… I hope you enjoyed the ride! Heartspell
it is great to fly…
love the spirit..
Happy Thursday!
🙂
Thank You, Jingle. Happy Thursday to you! Heartspell
Beautiful. Nicely done.
Thank you and for coming here to read. Heartspell
mmmm … this was so so cute i must say !! like a rhyme to e sung 🙂
Thank you for the sweet comments. Thank you for reading my poem. Heartspell
Wonderfully written, I felt as if I was tagging along. It has a very light and airy feel while being dynamic at the same time.
Regards…
I am glad you came along for the ride…the more the merrier! Thank you for the comment. Heartspell
Enjoyed your work ! 🙂
Thank you and thank you for coming here to read.
wow..so apt..we have a meteor shower lighting our skies tonight..you have paved the way..great to see you again at One Shot..cheers Pete
Oh, did you get to view the meteor shower? How fun! Thanks for allowing me to join in on One Shot and again I apologize for the linking error of the older post. Cheers to you! heartspell
You have no idea what an effect your poems have on me … phew!!! I live thru’ each and every line as I read your poem… this one too!!! Brilliant, heartspell! You have magic in your ways of expression… And that’s pure talent!!!
I felt like a bird…freeeee…. when I read this poem! One word – WOW!
You are far too kind, Kavita. But I am glad you felt like a bird… that’s freedom. Thank you always for your sweet words of encouragement. Heartspell
Short & sweet, ready to soar!
Let’s go! heartspell
Just love the freedom this one expresses…one feels released from the burdens that surround them…thanks for this one and for adding the email subscription button…I just hated missing your posts…thanks!
I didn’t know that I had added the e-mail subscription button, but I am glad you somehow were able to come here… your comments always mean a lot to me and I do love to share thoughts with others such as yourself. I have you on my blogroll… is that ok with you? Thank you, if it is. I think I asked once before, but perhaps i didn’t do well when sending the request . 🙂 Heartspell
Captured by a star– a lovely image. Nicely done!
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Thank you…you are kind. Heartpell
I always have such fascination with the stars 🙂 As I soar above the midnight sky…I get lost in those words..being the romantic soul I am!! Feeling of freedom in your words my friend, I love the image you have chosen!! Sending my friend lots of love xxxx
Thank you, Amanda…yes, I was thinking free… you should come fly with me. Thanks for the sweet words. 🙂 🙂 🙂 xxx Heartspell
wow. i really like the rhyme scheme in this one
Thank you for that! I appreciate you coming here to read. heartspell
whole lot of freedom in those words…i love looking at the stars and even those made by the fireworks…like the free of gravity line…and thanks for linking up to oneshot!
Thank you for including me in One Shot…and also for the unbound and kind comments.:) Heartspell
Great poem and a splendid image to illustrate it! Very creative! Thank you for sharing.
You are welcome…thank YOU for your sweet comments to ME. 🙂 Heartspell
This poem has a great sound to the lines and the last ones resonate for quite a powerful ending—flows very well too. Thanks, heartspell, for posting today! cheers 🙂
Thank you, Adam…it is very short this time, but thank you for the sweet comments. And again sorry for the mix-up on the other post. Heartspell