It’s late, so very, very late
but it’s okay
We’re on a trip to where
time is invisible
And in our minds’ eye
we’re young and carefree
like when it was just you
together with just me
When we could see
dreams, yet to come true
You were my welcome distraction
from all that distracted
in ways I didn’t wish for
There you were with your witty remarks
Your open arms always waiting
to wrap me up in your warmth
All you ever wanted was
my touch or my smile
Somehow you always seemed to know
just what I needed
That turned out to be, just you
It’s late, so very, very late
but it’s okay
what a beautiful lovesong…taking a moment to appreciate…I hope the person you wrote about gets to read this, understand, and smile back
I love the line, you were my welcome distraction from all that distracted
it says so much with so few words and describes perfectly how I feel about my special loved ones. Nice writing, heartspell. Lovely stuff.
Thank you, you are very kind. He did smile… Thank you for reading and for the lovely comments. heartspell
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help say hello to a fellow poet if you have a moment,
thanks!
😉
will do…
Ah yes, when love makes time disappear. A beautiful time and a lovely verse. Your words on love make me smile in remembrance.
I am glad that I could make you smile. Thank you for reading. Heartspell
Well written. My favorite line is “You were my welcome distraction
from all that distracted.” One’s love is just that, a focus in a crazy world.
You are right…we all need that kind of distraction. Thanks for coming here to read. heartspell
Wow…it is wonderful to have that special one in your life…my welcome distraction and forget about the world. I feel your soul in this, you have a wonderful way with words…I so appreciate your spirit. Thank you my friend, I always leave here with a warmness in my heart. Much love ~ Amanda x
Love to you as well, Amanda… your comments are so sweet and I do appreciate that you come here to read. It means a lot to me to have the encouragement of a dear friend. xxHeartspell
gave me big smiles…my welcome distraction…and its late but that is ok…a wonderful kinda love you got there…
How did you guess? I am glad you smiled; just means we are on the same page with that welcome distraction in our lives. Thanks. heartspell
delightful verse,
you seem in cheery mood, which is cool..
Happy Tuesday,
Smiles!
Thank you, Jingle…Happy Tuesday to you! 🙂
Gosh… this was lovely! Moments with this special person just seem to take away the importance of time.. somehow, nothing seems to matter…
Beautifully put, as ever, heartspell! You are too sweet! You bring out the best emotions in a reader…
You are far too kind, Kavita… you say the nicest things… what a dear you are. Thank you for reading my words and always appreciating them. heartspell